I love how it sounds like it has a beat in the first paragraph! I love and i dislike the second 4 line paragraph i love it because it has 2 words that rhyme that you wouldn't think they rhymed but if you say it in a certain way it does! But i dislike how it suddenly stops at the end! I would of liked to of heard more!! By Flossi.B
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short but sweet Henry i like the rhythm and scene setting
I love how it sounds like it has a beat in the first paragraph!
I love and i dislike the second 4 line paragraph i love it because it has 2 words that rhyme that you wouldn't think they rhymed but if you say it in a certain way it does! But i dislike how it suddenly stops at the end! I would of liked to of heard more!!
By Flossi.B
Short and very effective. Great rhyming. It is really nice
Well done Henry, a short but very effective poem.
it had a nice rhythm and flowed well.
Good job!
like the tempo - evocative and effective ... your mum (on you gmail acct).
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