Fantastic poem Ruby. We loved your rhyming. we like how the sentences were short and snappy.Jamie and Verity :P
I like the large use of line breaks, it adds a nice flow
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Fantastic poem Ruby. We loved your rhyming. we like how the sentences were short and snappy.
Jamie and Verity :P
I like the large use of line breaks, it adds a nice flow
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